Changes to our Synopsis...

As a group, we have decided to change the destination and the beginning of our 2 minutes. It started at a bench in a isolated field with shots of the main characters feet whilst he's sat down slowly discovering his face. We have now changed this idea to him running through a park/estate training to make the audience more aware that he is an ex boxer. We have decided to use the estate as it fits better with the mood/genre of the opening as it fits well with the character. The titles were supposed to be in the paper whilst the main character was looking through it but we have now decided to fade them in and out whilst the character is running. As the character is running through the estate/park he will have headphones in which will be playing diegetic music as it is in the characters ears, as he rests after training he will take out the headphones and the music will stop for the audience also. We have thought of another idea instead of the character sitting on the park bench which is he would be stood against a wall showing the stress he's feeling rather than relaxation. Around him we would have litter as it isn't the most upper class estate including the newspaper which would show the fight article drawing his attention to it. After the character has seen the article he's smoking a cigarette which is blown into the camera and pauses the frame of the smoke for 2-3 seconds which the cuts to the fight scene.

Another idea we had for the fight scene was to either have the diegetic sounds of the fight or to have the fight scene silent/white noise.